IELTS opinion essay: structure, model answer, and analysis.
Updated: February 2023
There are 5 types of essays in IELTS writing task 2 and a common one is an opinion essay.
So how do you know if it is an opinion essay?. You will first need to study the instruction words. These words tell you what you should write about and this should be the first step to take before you even begin to plan. Analyse the task and especially the instruction words so you do not go off-topic or write a different essay altogether.
Here are 2 essay tasks below, which one do you think is the opinion essay?
1. Most people agree that money cannot buy happiness. Why is happiness difficult to define? How can people achieve happiness?
2. Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Instruction words
Opinion essays will have various instruction words such as:
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To what extent do you agree or disagree?
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Do you agree or disagree?
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What is your opinion?
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Do you think…?
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What do you think….?
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In your opinion what is ….?
In some cases the instruction words ask your opinion it may be a discussion essay such as:
‘Discuss both views and give your own opinion’
The structure of a discussion essay is different from an opinion essay as you will need to explain peoples views before you go into your own opinion.
This task below is a 2 part question essay and the second question asks your opinion.
Most people agree that money cannot buy happiness. Why is happiness difficult to define? How can people achieve happiness?
The opinion essay that I am referring to asks ‘To what extent do you agree or disagree?’ means how much do you agree/disagree? , do you completely agree/disagree? or somewhat agree/disagree? or do you neither agree nor disagree?
You can write in your thesis statement something like: ‘ I completely agree because…..’ or if you don’t agree, something like: ‘ I absolutely disagree because…..’
What is an effective opinion essay structure?
There is no magic Band 9 structure but my students have found that the structure below works well in an opinion essay.
Tips on structure:
- The main body paragraphs will cover the reasons for your opinion; however, do not list ideas just use one central idea and explain and support it.
- Don’t wait until the conclusion to give your opinion. It must be throughout the whole essay.
- Don’t give 2 different opinions. Do not agree then disagree as it will confuse the examiner. You can balance it with why someone would hold an opposing view but it is not a discussion essay.
- I advise keeping the introduction under 60 words, each body paragraph should be approximately 90 to 105 words, the conclusion needs to be shorter than the introduction and no new ideas should be added to the conclusion
- Aim for between 270 to 295 words, over 300 words is not realistic as you only have 40 minutes to write the essay.
Which body paragraph is better?
Take a look at these 2 main body one paragraphs to the task below, what do you think will score higher?
Task question:
Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Example 1
A long time ago people used to go to market places and they bought basic daily necessities, now people can buy online and go to many high street shops. In addition, we can choose any hotel we like at cheap prices. Also, businesses compete with each other which means customers can buy items at low cost as well as a bigger selection of goods. Furthermore, the economy benefits because people can select from so many different products. For example, Amazon.com has millions of products that are much cheaper than buying at a shopping mall.
Example 2
Admittedly, these days there are far too many choices which can be overwhelming; however, I think that for consumers this is an advantage because it forces businesses to compete with each other. This means that shoppers can benefit greatly from lower prices. For example, over the past two decades, Ryanair and EasyJet budget airlines have considerably reduced the cost of airfares for flights all over Europe. Before this, there was only one airline to choose from at exorbitant costs. Presently, many more budget airline options are serving destinations worldwide with incredible bargains for customers.
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Analysing the question.
As with all IELTS essays, it is crucial to spend a couple of minutes analysing the task and underling the keywords so that you are writing relevant points in the essay. If you go off-topic or write irrelevant points it will affect your score.
This is the task question for my model answer below and it is clear that the essay is about having too many choices these days. This means that there is something negative about having many choices, as the word ‘too’ implies something negative. In my model answer, I disagree with this being a negative and in fact, many choices are beneficial.
Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Click here for the 5 steps you need to take before writing.
I advise 10 minutes of planning time, this includes time analysing the question and getting relevant ideas.
Click here for a lesson about examples in main body paragraphs.
Model Answer
Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Analysis
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