IELTS Writing task 1: Diagrams with a model answer

IELTS Model answer for 3 diagrams over 3 time periods

Here is a tricky looking task. It consists of 3 maps/diagrams over 3 time periods showing changes that have taken place. Actually, it is easier than it looks as long as you logically group the information. So for this model answer, I have 3 main body paragraphs. Each main body covers the map for each year.

Planning is important in IELTS writing task 1 just as it is in the essay section writing task 2. Spend about 3 minutes planning a task 1 as you must analyse the task, think of what comparisons you have to make, the language needed and decide on a logical structure.


The Task

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Model answer

The diagrams illustrate how West Park Secondary School has changed during three different periods since it was built in 1950. Overall, the main school building remained unchanged throughout the whole timeframe, while the farmland and houses were removed to make way for a car park, a science block and a sports field in later years.

In 1950 the area around the school consisted of houses to the west and farmland to the south-west. There was also a playground behind the school and a main road to the north.

Looking at the Map for 1980, it can be seen that the houses were demolished to make way for a science block and a car park. The farmland was converted into a sports field, while the playground remained unchanged.

By 2010, although the science block remained untouched, it is evident that the sports field and playground were reduced in size to make way for bigger parking facilities. The school building itself and the main road remained the same over the 60 year period.

170 words


Analysis

The introduction just rewords the task question, so start with paraphrasing the task by using synonyms or restructuring the sentences.

Keep this part simple and concise and make sure the paraphrasing contains the same meaning as the original task question. You do not have to paraphrase every single word but do not copy whole sentences.

The overview begins with ‘overall’ and briefly summarises the main features, no detail is given, such as years or key changes. I have only shown the main changes that have taken place. I also merged the overview with the introduction as the introduction was quite short.

The body paragraphs cover each map/diagram by year and the key changes. The task uses the past tense as the time periods are in the past.

I have also used the passive voice here such as   ‘it is evident that…’  and  ‘It can be seen that…’  To describe something that has been removed, use the passive such as ‘houses were demolished’ and ‘The farmland was converted into a sports field’

Keep the word count below 190 words but above 160 words. A very long report (over 200 words) does not give you a higher band score and you will end up running out of time.


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